First off, our apologies for the late response! All of us have been going back and forth with conventions, and it will not happen again.
Second, the modstaff would like to make sure that all of us are on the same page on this point. We understand that grammar can be a struggle - however, in a text-based roleplaying game, being clear is essential and all the more important. And with a character that holds such a high intelligence, errors seems all the more jarring and disconcerting. We'd like to emphasize that you take the time to proofread your writing if you intend to play such a character.
We did understand that the sample takes place in the SG setting rather than the R/A, and stand by our request - as well as thank you for writing a new sample.
If we're all clear at this point, please confirm/offer your own input, and we can proceed further. (And this time, not take over a week to get back to you. :c our bad.)
Re: REVISIONS
Second, the modstaff would like to make sure that all of us are on the same page on this point. We understand that grammar can be a struggle - however, in a text-based roleplaying game, being clear is essential and all the more important. And with a character that holds such a high intelligence, errors seems all the more jarring and disconcerting. We'd like to emphasize that you take the time to proofread your writing if you intend to play such a character.
We did understand that the sample takes place in the SG setting rather than the R/A, and stand by our request - as well as thank you for writing a new sample.
If we're all clear at this point, please confirm/offer your own input, and we can proceed further. (And this time, not take over a week to get back to you. :c our bad.)