Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--First person sample: We’d like the first person sample format to read more as it would if Skyfire were making a post on the Link network. The content is fine, but we were confused as to if it were a stream of conscious or a a ramble or a journal entry as it is and would like to see it with the Link-format.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!