Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Can you be a bit more specific on what medical tools and knick-knacks from Earth Ratchet will be bringing? A list or an example of the types of items would be fine, just so we understand what's included.
--First person is also a little short and has a slightly confusing switch of topic. We'd like to see it expanded and clarified.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!