Due to the limited available English canon for your character, the mods have decided to classify this as an OCC--an Obscure Canon Character.
Because of this, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;
--History expansion. You've hit on everything that you can find from canon, so now we'd like for you to fill in the blanks, either using headcanon or reasonable extrapolations. Some examples of what to add might be...What was he doing before he was a commander for the Decepticon Division, and how did he come to work for them? What caused him to lose his mind? --Personality elaboration. We'd like to see this section expanded to round out the character beyond the base of his murderous destruction. Maybe talk about what lies underneath that, which might have been there from before he lost his sanity.
Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!
REVISIONS
Due to the limited available English canon for your character, the mods have decided to classify this as an OCC--an Obscure Canon Character.
Because of this, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;
--History expansion. You've hit on everything that you can find from canon, so now we'd like for you to fill in the blanks, either using headcanon or reasonable extrapolations. Some examples of what to add might be...What was he doing before he was a commander for the Decepticon Division, and how did he come to work for them? What caused him to lose his mind?
--Personality elaboration. We'd like to see this section expanded to round out the character beyond the base of his murderous destruction. Maybe talk about what lies underneath that, which might have been there from before he lost his sanity.
Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!