Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--First Person sample: We feel that the current sample has a very dense amount of dialog and thinking out loud for what we see in canon and your personality section. As Rung is equipped with the capacity for self-expression, we’d like to see this edited to include more emoting/action to go along with the words so that we can get a better feel of the character, and possibly not include talking about his patients (which you have mentioned that he would not do.)

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!