Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Grammar edits: We were noticing a high number of commas in the personality and third person sections which make the app difficult to parse. We recommend going over the app again for a final proofread and double-checking the syntax.
--Minor note: All other parts of the character were fine, but while we’ve got you for the other edits we’d like to see what vehicle he turns into added into the powers section.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!