Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Personality Elaborations: While you do a good job with mentioning Bumblebee's relationships to others, we're looking for some solid traits that define him as well. Elements such as his luck, determination, and bravery would be good supplements here, which are mentioned on the wiki links, or his quick-thinking ability as a scout which is mentioned in your powers section.
--Power Elaborations: We'd like to see a reference point given for the empathy mentioned--is this supposed to be a general sensitivity to others, or can he actually read thoughts?


Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!