Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

» Pull point: If Shephard is arriving after sacrificing herself, how will she be appearing in Re/Alignment? (IE will she return to her normal body?)

» History: Since this Shepard is a canon AU, we would like to know the following:
- Which crew member was sacrificed on Virmire?
- Which (current and former) crew members did not survive the events of Mass Effect 3?
- Was a romance pursued in ME1/2/3, or is this Shepard single?

» Personality edits: There were some elements in your personality that we wanted additional clarification on to see where they were coming from. We would like to see a canon example of a moment in time in which Shepard felt defeated and ready to give up, and would also like to see some resolution between Shepard being an asshole and a hothead and Shepard being well into the Paragon alignment.

» Powers/Abilities.
- As Shepard is coming in as an Engineer, we would like to see her abilities in your words with small descriptions. We're looking to see what she's got and how it will translate into a non-video-game setting.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!