Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;
--While characters do change over time, we’re more interested in how Aziraphale is now. Please limit your use of History in your Personality section; right now, the first two-three paragraphs look like they should be in the previous section. --We’d like to see a few more specifics in your Powers section - give us a better idea of the Miracles, and what limits he has on them. (If you want/need a reason to put a limit on them; God [as the form Aziraphale would likely recognize] is not present.)
Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!
REVISIONS
--While characters do change over time, we’re more interested in how Aziraphale is now. Please limit your use of History in your Personality section; right now, the first two-three paragraphs look like they should be in the previous section.
--We’d like to see a few more specifics in your Powers section - give us a better idea of the Miracles, and what limits he has on them. (If you want/need a reason to put a limit on them; God [as the form Aziraphale would likely recognize] is not present.)
Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!