Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Personality: Currently the first part of your personality reads more like a history. While supplementing traits with canon is beneficial, we’d like to see more about how Malgus currently is.
--This is more of a note than a revision, but Malgus will feel his connection to the force slightly dampened in Re-Aligned. He’ll still be able to do everything he could do before, it will just be slightly harder for him, or take slightly longer. This will, of course, get better with time.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!