re_alignedmods | --APPLICATION--

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--APPLICATION--

A P P L I C A T I O N

APPLICATIONS ARE CLOSED

To apply, fill out the form below and post it as a comment to this page. Feel free to check out the Application FAQ if you have any questions! Please also note that some applications may take longer to process than others; while we strive to go in the order they were received, certain canons may require additional research on the mod's behalf and thus may be delayed. If this is the case, we will leave a note saying so!

Applications are closed. Thank you for participating in our final round!

Everything else should be explained in the application itself below. Please post your submission as a link to a journal post!

Player Information
*Name/Alias: (Give us something to call you)
*Your Journal: (Do you have a personal journal account on DW? If not, put 'N/A' instead)
*Age: (If you don't want to give a specific age, please note whether or not you're over 16.)
*Contact Information: (Please give us a way to contact you! Please not that unless you request otherwise, this is the information that will be made public on the 'taken' page.)
*Characters already in the game: (For those players who already have characters in the game. First time players please put 'N/A.')

Character Information
*Character Name: (Give us the character's whole name, not only one part of. <- Ex: Optimus Prime, Megatron, Samuel James Witwicky.)
*Character Canon: (Name the specific canon/continuity that your character is from. Ex: Star Trek: The 2009 movie, & Star Trek: The Next Generation)
*Age: (If you don't know the specific age, give us a general idea; ex - 'child' or 'extremely old')
*Race: (Are you playing a Cybertronian? A human? Something else entirely?)
*Timeline/Pull Point: (Please give as much context as possible, such as including a short summary in addition to the episode number.)

*History: (We will accept links to a wiki for Canon characters. However, in lieu of a link (for characters with short wikis or without much canon information) we would like to see a summary of the character's past in your own words. Try to include as little headcanon as possible. In the case of AUs/OCCs, we'll need more than just a wiki link!)
*Personality: (Please be clear, concise, and complete. We're looking for at least two or three paragraphs.)
*Powers/Abilities: (What special abilities does your character have? Assume we know nothing about them or their species (unless they're a standard human). Please include any skills or qualities of note, ex, 'experienced sniper', 'genius level intelligence', etc.
Overpowered characters will result in revisions. If your character is more powerful than one of the 13, you're doing it wrong. The Lambda is capable of dampening a character's abilities, so feel free to make use of this if you need to.)
*Inventory: (What your character is coming in with. If these items do special things, be detailed in describing them! And please note the <a href="http://re-alignedmods.dreamwidth.org/1529.html#vehicle">notes</a> describing limits.)
*Starting Polarity: (If you have a preference for which Firstforged you will be aligned with, please note it here! Further information about Polarity can be found <a href="http://re-alignedmods.dreamwidth.org/385.html#polarity">here</a>. A list of the active 13 can be found <a href="http://re-alignedmods.dreamwidth.org/385.html#thirteen">here</a>. Mods have final say, but will take your suggestion into account.)

If AU, how does your character differ from canon?: (Non AU apps may ignore this question. CRAUs and OAUs should get in to specifics here regarding what changes there are from their character's original canon. We'll need at least a paragraph explaining details.)

Writing Samples (These should be stand-alone samples. You may re-use samples from other applications you have written, but will not be accepting links to previous threads/museboxes/dear mun: the sample should be visible within your app.)
*First Person Sample: (A first person sample should show us how your character communicates over the Link - via text, audio, or video. Optional Prompt: Your best friend/ally/accomplice/favorite minion has gone missing, and you suspect they're on the planet somewhere. Make a broadcast that indicates your need for their return, and describes this individual to help others identify them.)
*Third Person Sample: (This should be a few paragraphs of prose-style action. It should focus on your character, and should offer some insight in to their thought patterns, the way they interact with the world, and overall should give us an idea of both them and your own writing style. We like to see creativity used here in preference to rehashing of a canon scene. Optional Prompt: You wake up in the middle of a vast, unfamiliar, rocky terrain, underneath a strange sky. Who do you call for? What do you do?)

Final Notes: (Need to cover anything that hasn't already been covered? Use this spot. Or just ignore it if you've already gotten everything down.)

Player Information
*Name/Alias: (Give us something to call you)
*Your Journal: (Do you have a personal journal account on DW? If not, put 'N/A' instead)
*Age: (If you don't want to give a specific age, please note whether or not you're over 16.)
*Contact Information: (Please give us a way to contact you! Please not that unless you request otherwise, this is the information that will be made public on the 'taken' page.)
*Characters already in the game: (For those players who already have characters in the game. First time players please put 'N/A.')

Character Information
*Character Name: (Give us the character's whole name, not only one part of. <- Ex: Optimus Prime, Megatron, Samuel James Witwicky.)
*Character Canon: (Name the specific canon/continuity that your character is from. Ex: Star Trek: The 2009 movie, & Star Trek: The Next Generation)
*Age: (If you don't know the specific age, give us a general idea; ex - 'child' or 'extremely old')
*Race: (Are you playing a Cybertronian? A human? Something else entirely?)
*Timeline/Pull Point: (Please give as much context as possible, such as including a short summary in addition to the episode number.)

*History: (We will accept links to a wiki for Canon characters. However, in lieu of a link (for characters with short wikis or without much canon information) we would like to see a summary of the character's past in your own words. Try to include as little headcanon as possible. In the case of AUs/OCCs, we'll need more than just a wiki link!)
*Personality: (Please be clear, concise, and complete. We're looking for at least two or three paragraphs.)
*Powers/Abilities: (What special abilities does your character have? Assume we know nothing about them or their species (unless they're a standard human). Please include any skills or qualities of note, ex, 'experienced sniper', 'genius level intelligence', etc.
Overpowered characters will result in revisions. If your character is more powerful than one of the 13, you're doing it wrong. The Lambda is capable of dampening a character's abilities, so feel free to make use of this if you need to.)
*Inventory: (What your character is coming in with. If these items do special things, be detailed in describing them! And please note the notes describing limits.)
*Starting Polarity: (If you have a preference for which Firstforged you will be aligned with, please note it here! Further information about Polarity can be found here. A list of the active 13 can be found here. Mods have final say, but will take your suggestion into account.)

If AU, how does your character differ from canon?: (Non AU apps may ignore this question. CRAUs and OAUs should get in to specifics here regarding what changes there are from their character's original canon. We'll need at least a paragraph explaining details.)

Writing Samples
(These should be stand-alone samples. You may re-use samples from other applications you have written, but will not be accepting links to previous threads/museboxes/dear mun: the sample should be visible within your app.)
*First Person Sample: (A first person sample should show us how your character communicates over the Link - via text, audio, or video. Optional Prompt: Your best friend/ally/accomplice/favorite minion has gone missing, and you suspect they're on the planet somewhere. Make a broadcast that indicates your need for their return, and describes this individual to help others identify them.)
*Third Person Sample: (This should be a few paragraphs of prose-style action. It should focus on your character, and should offer some insight in to their thought patterns, the way they interact with the world, and overall should give us an idea of both them and your own writing style. We like to see creativity used here in preference to rehashing of a canon scene. Optional Prompt: You wake up in the middle of a vast, unfamiliar, rocky terrain, underneath a strange sky. Who do you call for? What do you do?)

Final Notes: (Need to cover anything that hasn't already been covered? Use this spot. Or just ignore it if you've already gotten everything down.)

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Flat | Top-Level Comments Only

If I am the first, at least I am setting the bar low.

Hope it's okay I posted it as a link? I couldn't see that covered in the FAQ. :(

You're right, it wasn't - posting as a link is fine, and I'll go ahead and edit that!

(Also, yes, apps are open for anyone who's reading this!)

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sword_redemption - 2012-06-07 04:23 (UTC) - Expand

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not_halfbaked - 2012-06-08 05:11 (UTC) - Expand

ACCEPT WITH NOTE

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-15 04:12 (UTC) - Expand

"Now he's back home, and he's ready to make some noise!"

thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Personality elaborations. We’d like to see more specifics in this, as to what parts are headcanon, and what parts can be cited directly from the movie/game. As this is a character with a limited/questionable sentience, we're also looking for further traits in that regard, and how they'll be showing themselves in his demeanor when brought into the game.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

Re: REVISIONS

wakizashi_straight - 2012-06-15 14:51 (UTC) - Expand

ACCEPTED

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-17 00:04 (UTC) - Expand

YAY http://sparkless.dreamwidth.org/493.html

thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. We’re happy to say that the appstaff have decided to accept your application!

Starscream will awaken with a

megatronicpolarity; an Alignment to Megatronus Prime. But before you start playing them, we ask that you first do a few simple things;

--Join the

re_alignment,

re_alignment_ooc, and

re_alignment_logs communities.
--Feel free to join our crack comm,

ruinedforever as well!
--Friend

keep them from harm and injustice

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. We’re happy to say that the appstaff have decided to accept your application!

Ratchet will awaken with a

solianpolarity; an Alignment to Solus Prime. But before you start playing them, we ask that you first do a few simple things;

--Join the

re_alignment,

re_alignment_ooc, and

re_alignment_logs communities.
--Feel free to join our crack comm,

ruinedforever as well!
--Friend

re_alignedmods. It’s also highly suggested that you friend your patron Firstforged as well, if not all of them.
--Make sure there’s a public version of your application in your journal. It doesn’t have to include the Player Information or Samples, but the rest of it should be there!
--Also make sure there’s an HMD in your journal.
--Introduce yourself in the OOC comm!

We also note that Ratchet will not come in with the healing ray, as he is not shown to use it in the Prime cartoon - we are considering the War for Cybertron/Fall of Cybertron separate continuities from said cartoon.

Also, please watch the OOC community for some special information regarding the opening post; it’s going to be a little different than standard.

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docbot - 2012-06-15 04:36 (UTC) - Expand

I eschew fancy rock lyrics today, okay. I'm tired. But you've got an app now.

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. We’re happy to say that the appstaff have decided to accept your application!

Megamind will awaken with a

nexicpolarity; an Alignment to Nexus Prime. But before you start playing them, we ask that you first do a few simple things;

--Join the

re_alignment,

re_alignment_ooc, and

re_alignment_logs communities.
--Fill out your info on the Taken page.
--Feel free to join our crack comm,

ruinedforever as well!
--Friend

re_alignedmods. It’s also highly suggested that you friend your patron Firstforged as well, if not all of them.
--Make sure there’s a public version of your application in your journal. It doesn’t have to include the Player Information or Samples, but the rest of it should be there!
--Also make sure there’s an HMD in your journal.
--Introduce yourself in the OOC comm!

The mods have a note regarding the DE-Gun; if you want to bring it in, it will be chronically damaged, and even Megamind’s genius will have difficulty repairing it. Its effects will therefore be greatly reduced in power; DE-ath setting will certainly hurt and damage but will not outright kill, for example. If you’d like to have him repair it over time, it will require discussion with the mods.

Also, please watch the OOC community for some special information regarding the opening post; it’s going to be a little different than standard.

Re: ACCEPT WITH NOTE

megamind - 2012-06-15 04:30 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-15 04:32 (UTC) - Expand

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megamind - 2012-06-15 04:33 (UTC) - Expand

"Look, I'm a scientist first and foremost, but you can't deny there's an element of the unknown here."

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. We’re happy to say that the appstaff have decided to accept your application!

Jetfire will awaken with a

maxicpolarity; an Alignment to Liege Maximo. But before you start playing them, we ask that you first do a few simple things;

--Join the

re_alignment,

re_alignment_ooc, and

re_alignment_logs communities.
--Feel free to join our crack comm,

ruinedforever as well!
--Friend

The altmode is useless, but at least she can turn invisible?

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Your application has a large amount of grammar issues and awkward sentences, to the point of making it difficult to understand. Please revise the writing quality so that the appstaff can make a final decision.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

Re: REVISIONS

invisiblepinkboat - 2012-06-16 01:02 (UTC) - Expand

ACCEPTED

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-17 00:27 (UTC) - Expand

http://rotafortunae.dreamwidth.org/890.html

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--We’d like to see an overhaul on some of the powers. You’ve got a good start on adapting a heavily video-game-mechanic powerset to a DW game, but we’re uncomfortable approving them as-is.
----We ask that you keep ONE of Fair Game (item), Gamble (power), and Transformation (power).
----We ask that you keep ONE of Slow, Haste, Stop, or Doom.

More powers can be re-awarded as the game progresses. Everything else you’ve written is fine - note that the Corridors of Darkness will be even more dangerous to use near the Badlands, and proximity to the Badlands will also make his Coat more than a little uncomfortable to wear. (Too warm, stifling, etc - details are up to you.)

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

Re: REVISIONS

rotafortunae - 2012-06-17 04:15 (UTC) - Expand

ACCEPTED

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-18 00:51 (UTC) - Expand

Re: ACCEPTED

rotafortunae - 2012-06-18 01:28 (UTC) - Expand

Don't Ask!

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. We’re happy to say that the appstaff have decided to accept your application!

Slipstream will awaken with a

nexicpolarity; an Alignment to Nexus Prime. But before you start playing them, we ask that you first do a few simple things;

--Join the

re_alignment,

re_alignment_ooc, and

re_alignment_logs communities.
--Fill out your info on the Taken page.
--Feel free to join our crack comm,

ruinedforever as well!
--Friend

re_alignedmods. It’s also highly suggested that you friend your patron Firstforged as well, if not all of them.
--Make sure there’s a public version of your application in your journal. It doesn’t have to include the Player Information or Samples, but the rest of it should be there!
--Also make sure there’s an HMD in your journal.
--Introduce yourself in the OOC comm!

Please note the mods have a few stipulations regarding your acceptance. As Slipstream never displayed hacking abilities in canon that were out of the ordinary, we ask that you drop that aspect from your characterization. Slipstream will also not come in with the Soundwave doll, though she is welcome to find one in the Junk Pile at a later period of time.

Also, please watch the OOC community for some special information regarding the opening post; it’s going to be a little different than standard

question

dontasktrix - 2012-06-15 08:58 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-18 17:26 (UTC) - Expand

App here at character journal: http://not-halfbaked.dreamwidth.org/275.html

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--The mods have decided to enforce a one month wait period in terms of new canons, and new materials from a canon. We apologize for not having this up sooner. For the purposes of this first round, we ask that you set your canon pull point episode no later than May 26th.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

Re: REVISIONS

not_halfbaked - 2012-06-15 04:43 (UTC) - Expand

Re: REVISIONS

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-15 20:21 (UTC) - Expand

Re: REVISIONS

not_halfbaked - 2012-06-15 20:52 (UTC) - Expand

ACCEPTED

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-18 00:59 (UTC) - Expand

Re: ACCEPTED

not_halfbaked - 2012-06-18 19:59 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-18 20:13 (UTC) - Expand

re: HMD

knightoflight - 2012-06-18 20:44 (UTC) - Expand

Re: ACCEPTED

my_own_trope - 2012-06-19 23:33 (UTC) - Expand

Re: ACCEPTED (Thanks! ...and plot suggestion?)

not_halfbaked - 2012-06-20 18:35 (UTC) - Expand

Re: ACCEPTED (Thanks! ...and plot suggestion?)

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-20 20:56 (UTC) - Expand

Re: ACCEPTED (Thanks! ...and plot suggestion?)

not_halfbaked - 2012-06-20 21:46 (UTC) - Expand

I'll be sure to be on my best behavior, Doc.

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Due to the conflicting canons, the modstaff is considering the War for Cybertron/Fall of Cybertron continuities (along with Exiles) separate from the Prime cartoon. Please adjust your application to reflect this.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

Question on revisions!

wheeljackofalltrades - 2012-06-15 06:17 (UTC) - Expand

Hopefully an answer!

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-16 08:00 (UTC) - Expand

Revisions!

wheeljackofalltrades - 2012-06-16 08:17 (UTC) - Expand

ACCEPTED

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-18 02:17 (UTC) - Expand

He's not only an automobile...

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. We’re happy to say that the appstaff have decided to accept your application!

Knockout will awaken with a

solianpolarity; an Alignment to Solus Prime. But before you start playing them, we ask that you first do a few simple things;

--Join the

re_alignment,

re_alignment_ooc, and

re_alignment_logs communities.
--Fill out your info on the Taken page.
--Feel free to join our crack comm,

ruinedforever as well!
--Friend

"Conquest is made of the ashes of one's enemies."

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. We’re happy to say that the appstaff have decided to accept your application!

Starscream will awaken with a

megatronicpolarity; an Alignment to Megatronus Prime. But before you start playing them, we ask that you first do a few simple things;

--Join the

re_alignment,

re_alignment_ooc, and

re_alignment_logs communities.
--Fill out your info on the Taken page.
--Feel free to join our crack comm,

ruinedforever as well!
--Friend

dining at the ritz, we'll meet at nine precisely

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--While characters do change over time, we’re more interested in how Aziraphale is now. Please limit your use of History in your Personality section; right now, the first two-three paragraphs look like they should be in the previous section.
--We’d like to see a few more specifics in your Powers section - give us a better idea of the Miracles, and what limits he has on them. (If you want/need a reason to put a limit on them; God [as the form Aziraphale would likely recognize] is not present.)

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

“Speed provides the one genuinely modern pleasure.”

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. We’re happy to say that the appstaff have decided to accept your application!

Blurr will awaken with a

vectorianpolarity; an Alignment to Vector Prime. But before you start playing them, we ask that you first do a few simple things;

--Join the

re_alignment,

re_alignment_ooc, and

re_alignment_logs communities.
--Fill out your info on the Taken page.
--Feel free to join our crack comm,

ruinedforever as well!
--Friend

re_alignedmods. It’s also highly suggested that you friend your patron Firstforged as well, if not all of them.
--Make sure there’s a public version of your application in your journal. It doesn’t have to include the Player Information or Samples, but the rest of it should be there!
--Also make sure there’s an HMD in your journal.
--Introduce yourself in the OOC comm!

We would like to note that Blurr will not be able to bounce across the galaxy in the current state of the game. (We also ask that you keep an eye on your grammar and spelling; while not enough to warrant a revision, there were a few spots the mods had to reread multiple times to understand what you were saying!)

Also, please watch the OOC community for some special information regarding the opening post; it’s going to be a little different than standard.

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raceme - 2012-06-15 16:08 (UTC) - Expand

http://organ-pharming.dreamwidth.org/458.html

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Please flesh out Pharma’s personality. We’d like to see his actions extrapolated into how they reflect on his character--such as how things change for him in going from good medic to bad, instead of just noting that they change.
--Inventory specifics - examples of tools, if nothing else.
--Please either rewrite your 3rd person sample with paragraph breaks, or give us a new one; a large block of text can be difficult to parse correctly!

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

Re: REVISIONS

organ_pharming - 2012-06-17 01:55 (UTC) - Expand

ACCEPTED

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-18 01:43 (UTC) - Expand

"At the end of revenge, there is nothing..."

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Give us some information about the Numbers. They and their effects are mentioned, but they themselves are not explained; what are they?
--We’d also like some limits on the telekinesis - what is the maximum V can can lift/move? Etc.

These are not revisions per se, but we note that his Mind Control will require a permissions post, and that his Teleportation will be limited; he will have to at least visited a place before he can teleport to it.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

Re: REVISIONS

vo5 - 2012-06-15 06:17 (UTC) - Expand

ACCEPTED

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-18 01:52 (UTC) - Expand

It's important to remember everything

Edited 2012-06-12 00:10 (UTC)

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. We’re happy to say that the appstaff have decided to accept your application!

4 will awaken with a [Bad username or unknown identity: ”maxicpolarity”]; an Alignment to Liege Maximo. But before you start playing them, we ask that you first do a few simple things;

--Join the

re_alignment,

re_alignment_ooc, and [Bad username or unknown identity: ”re_alignment_logs"] communities.
--Fill out your info on the Taken page and Player Contact.
--Feel free to join our crack comm,

ruinedforever as well!
--Friend

this will give me a reason to upload some damn icons.

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--You seem to be missing a canon pull point! We’ll need this portion of the app filled out before we can progress further.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

/facepalm

surrenderedspark - 2012-06-17 01:20 (UTC) - Expand

ACCEPTED

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-18 01:59 (UTC) - Expand

OHAI THAR

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Some of the personality seems to contradict itself, and requires elaboration; how does Jazz being loyal to his friends mesh with him being willing to desert the war if given a chance? Other parts aren’t giving clear cause and effect; how does loving new information and experiences lead to him wanting to desert? Please go over this section
--Watch your written accent; if you’re going to be writing Jazz’s out, we ask that you tone it down or reconsider the phrasing. It is difficult to read as it is, and is coming across with a different dialect that what we remember from the movie (the ‘ahs’ in particular.)

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

Re: REVISIONS

sabriel - 2012-06-19 06:06 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-19 21:17 (UTC) - Expand

Stuffed with a...nevermind.

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. We’re happy to say that the appstaff have decided to accept your application!

Raf will awaken with a

trionicpolarity; an Alignment to Alpha Trion. But before you start playing them, we ask that you first do a few simple things;

--Join the

re_alignment,

re_alignment_ooc, and [Bad username or unknown identity: ”re_alignment_logs"] communities.
--Fill out your info on the Taken page and Player Contact.
--Feel free to join our crack comm,

ruinedforever as well!
--Friend

Lets hope I didn't completely screw this up!

Edited 2012-06-15 01:26 (UTC)

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Personality. It’s short and simple, but too much so. Please work on elaborating what you have - we’re not asking for making things up, but draw further conclusions from what you’ve already written. What else can be said about about him being brave and heroic? What are his likes, dislikes?
--Your first person sample is not long enough to give us a good feel of his ‘voice’. Please either lengthen it, or write a new, longer one.

We’ve also noticed some issues regarding capitalization throughout the app, specifically random parts in the middle of a sentence that don’t require a capital - please keep an eye on those!

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

Re: REVISIONS

childish_hero - 2012-06-20 22:11 (UTC) - Expand

Declined

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-23 05:27 (UTC) - Expand

Do you know what Simper Fidelis is?

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--Personality section needs to be tightened. We like what you are saying here, but there are a number of typos and word repetitions that should be cleaned up (such as ‘friends’ four times in one paragraph).
--First Person section needs to be a little longer, to let his personality shine through. We’d like to get a good idea of what Chris sounds like from this!
--Third Person should also be elaborated a little bit to give us a better idea of how Chris thinks.
--Finally, this is more a note than a revision: His Advent Deck is fine to have and the powers are acceptable! Copy Vent will require a permissions post/permission from whoever it is used on, however.

Please post your revisions within 72 hours. If this isn’t enough time, please let us know!

Re: REVISIONS

alwaysfaithful - 2012-06-23 16:30 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

re_alignedmods - 2012-06-23 18:14 (UTC) - Expand

Just a broken down mech.

Thank you for applying at Re/Alignment. Before you’re accepted into the game, the appstaff would like to see revisions on the following;

--General headcanon revisions: We aren’t sure where Breakdown’s hearing is coming from, or the rock-arranging. While we know there can be more to a character than what is shown on screen, for the purposes of the app we’d like to see a Breakdown based more in canon.
--Related to the above, we’d prefer no Ground Penetrating Radar as its not shown in the show.
--Watch voice fluctuations in the samples--sometimes he sounds very intelligent, at other times he doesn’t. We’d like to see more consistency.
--Personality is mostly good! We’d like to see a bit more of what makes him a Decepticon, though, to go with what makes him a ‘bro.’

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